Again i appreciate what you're saying, i didn't take it offensively or anything, i always like to hear people's thoughts on my work, and you are right some shots sequences do look better than others. It'll all get better man!!! Keep up the good work, you've got some inventive work, i'll be looking out for more.
Hey Jake - Thanks for your comments on my stuff :)
Regarding the two directors comment. (and yes - totally intended as constructive crit) - if I'm being honest, yes, I definately do think some shots are better than others.
And it's not that those shots are terrible - but th opposite in face. It's because there are some really superb shots in there, I really noticed it when it went back to being 'normal' - that may sound harsher than I intend it - but I can't think of a better word.
Maybe some shots were not lit? (or not as well lit) ?
But I reckon if you pumped out your next vid where all the shots were as gorgeous as the best ones in this - you'd have a 'blow-yer-socks-off' vid of mamouth proportions.
cheers dude :)
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Appreciate your comments, curious did you think some of it wasn't as good as others when you say it looks like two different director styles (i'm curious, constructive criticism is encouraged!!!!) cheers all the same.
The music is not to be taken serious and I dont particularly like the gangster-pattern-videos (the peugeot nearly ruins it)... still - respect for Your work!
"An end to need and the politics of greed - with love"
Sup bro,
like the video. i like cut aways and the close up shots. i aint feeling the song to much, but i know that aint got nothing to do with you!
alos check out another vid called future brixton, on our profile.
Hey Moog,
Again i appreciate what you're saying, i didn't take it offensively or anything, i always like to hear people's thoughts on my work, and you are right some shots sequences do look better than others. It'll all get better man!!! Keep up the good work, you've got some inventive work, i'll be looking out for more.
Peace.
Jake Bryan - Amaning
jake@f2rfilms.com
Hey Jake - Thanks for your comments on my stuff :)
Regarding the two directors comment. (and yes - totally intended as constructive crit) - if I'm being honest, yes, I definately do think some shots are better than others.
And it's not that those shots are terrible - but th opposite in face. It's because there are some really superb shots in there, I really noticed it when it went back to being 'normal' - that may sound harsher than I intend it - but I can't think of a better word.
Maybe some shots were not lit? (or not as well lit) ?
But I reckon if you pumped out your next vid where all the shots were as gorgeous as the best ones in this - you'd have a 'blow-yer-socks-off' vid of mamouth proportions.
cheers dude :)
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Thanks for your comments, the music isn't what i'd go for but its all slow progress and practice nevertheless
Jake Bryan - Amaning
jake@f2rfilms.com
07957 320078
Appreciate your comments, curious did you think some of it wasn't as good as others when you say it looks like two different director styles (i'm curious, constructive criticism is encouraged!!!!) cheers all the same.
This was shot a a Z1e with nikon lenses.
Jake Bryan - Amaning
jake@f2rfilms.com
07957 320078
The music is not to be taken serious and I dont particularly like the gangster-pattern-videos (the peugeot nearly ruins it)... still - respect for Your work!
"An end to need and the politics of greed - with love"
There's some pretty cool shots in there - though it almost feels like it was shot by two directors. The good stuff is really good though - nice job.
Be interested to know what you shot on - my guess is HVX with an sgpro ??
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