Lots of nice ideas, partic the woman/man stuff and messing around with live/animation. Could do with a bit more focus for me, though not sure exactly what I'd suggest.
Song needs a lot of production/people singing in tune

Comment by radarsu

In general, I would do well to focus more. This video is no exception. However, it is much more focused than what I originally wanted to do. So, you can be thankful you were spared the early concepts (I think it was about dropping people off of bridges or something... I forget).

I can't really go too deep with your critique of the song, I wasn't producer on that track or anything. However, I was producer and writer on that other song I just posted (Dream), so that's totally fair game for feedback. As kind or harsh as you care to make it.

Comment by IceBlock Films